In her last years, Grandma walked
down the bit of road and back,
arms of her quilted fuchsia coat
flapping in exaggerated vigor,
half-teasing my mother
who urged her on in exercise.
Grandma moved at a tilt,
back and shoulders bent,
gray head usually bowed a little.
"Oh! Pretty!" she once exclaimed,
struck by the inset rocks and glistening
tar of a filled-in pothole at her feet.
These days, I find myself, too often,
tilting. I see maple seeds, mostly,
clumped at the edges of the sidewalk
or crushed down the middle by many
passing feet. Their wings are veined
and fin-like, long as splendid Betta tails,
thin and brittle as old paper. In rose,
straw, or copper they hint
that grace is not only for those
who can look up.
down the bit of road and back,
arms of her quilted fuchsia coat
flapping in exaggerated vigor,
half-teasing my mother
who urged her on in exercise.
Grandma moved at a tilt,
back and shoulders bent,
gray head usually bowed a little.
"Oh! Pretty!" she once exclaimed,
struck by the inset rocks and glistening
tar of a filled-in pothole at her feet.
These days, I find myself, too often,
tilting. I see maple seeds, mostly,
clumped at the edges of the sidewalk
or crushed down the middle by many
passing feet. Their wings are veined
and fin-like, long as splendid Betta tails,
thin and brittle as old paper. In rose,
straw, or copper they hint
that grace is not only for those
who can look up.
Very nicely done. Your eye for detail, your ear for cadence, everything is right. And the gentle, beautiful wit of the last sentence!
ReplyDeleteThank you, as always.
Thanks, Thomas!
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