Friday, January 3, 2014

The Old Barn

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She's dismantling, you know.
To gain an extra edge of field,
they're pulling her down--
piece by red-flecked piece,
bit by bit, skin and sinew--
all the way down
to her chambered heart.
What last stories sigh
as the orange-white sun
crests the fields' edge
and first light blesses inner rooms
from brown to gold?


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The neighbor made a wren house
from her salvaged sides.
It sits atop my desk--a bit odd,
like a box of ashes on the mantle.
The window behind it frames
a long tooth of ice and a single city star.
The neighbor says the birds nest soonest
in old wood.


9 comments:

  1. This reader stands abashed with admiration before the beauty of this poem. It seems especially graced. The exactitude of detail, the serene clarity of expression ...

    I once told Dr Impson (if I may say so!) that one always expects excellence of your work, but each new excellence still comes as a welcome and a pleasant surprise! You have the knack of bringing wonderful things out of your poetic storehouse. May your leaf never wither, even in this boreal winter!

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    1. Oh, thank you! Such kind words help the leaves perk up again :)

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  2. What Tom said! You just get better all the time, Elena. I love every beautiful line of this poem. The description of the barn brought several barns I've known clearly to mind.

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    1. Thank you! I'm grateful you liked it. It was a solace to write this poem, but I sometimes have trouble evaluating my own work.

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    2. The hardest thing always is to see what we ourselves do. You will gain in confidence as you grow!

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  3. dearest, I do so love this one. Perfect expression to those parts of our lives now behind us. Its hard to say goodbye to those old buildings where we built so many memories.

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