Thursday, June 20, 2013

Always

I believe in kindness--
scent of summer rain,
visceral as earth's collective sigh
when drouth unclenches.
I believe in mercy multitudinous
as corn tassels glimpsed
from the chicken house roof--
and love layered miles up,
stacked like the air above
children cloud-gazing in the grass.
I believe it like the oxygen,
unfelt, feeding my heart.
I've seen it in a thousand
broken mirror reflections
flashing light even
as they sliced my hands.

6 comments:

  1. Simply elegant, Elena. I love the way the imagery moves from gentle -- rain, corn, clouds -- to the sharpness of broken mirror shards and sliced hands -- and yet the hope and the beauty remains. It's beautiful.

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    1. Dr. Impson, I am so glad you enjoyed this! Thank you for your kind words. It's that old story, isn't it, of how the darkness isn't the final word?

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  2. Wow...I think that I need to memorize this one:)

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    1. Aw, what a lovely compliment! Maybe I should, too. Sometimes I forget what I believe.

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  3. Please allow me to add my praise to those comments above. This reader finds himself wishing that the poem were longer, as you've created a chain of images by which one is arrested, enticed, fascinated, delighted. One is very reluctant to leave the "world" of this poem!

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    1. I'm very glad the images drew you in and brought you joy! As I revisit the poem, I do catch a hint it could keep going. Perhaps someday.

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