Tuesday, February 11, 2014

Limitations

The petals fold
(you do not know it yet,
but they are pink)
around a secret sorrow.
They are cloaked,
all of them,
in green, tough, tender,
creased green,
the cowl a blossom wears
before it is born.
Where do the crimped,
lace-veined membranes
find courage to taste
wind, rain, sun,
to spill to the last
their touchless
essence.

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You learn, in life
to live with the ringing
in your ears--the thing inside
that makes perfect silence
impossible. Think on it too much, and
you'll go mad.
Put on a bit of music,
maybe the TV, and you won't
notice, the tremolo against
your brain, the soprano static
of your humanity.
You want the silence . . . no,
you want the space
the silence makes,
as if then you might rediscover
your soul.

 * * *

Kneeling in sunshine,
forehead to carpet,
at prayer you picture
your back folded out
like wings with rib-cage veins,
like storybook flaps.
Your heart, unobstructed, blinks
under the gaze of heaven.

6 comments:

  1. Wow! I absolutely adore the first stanza -- so painterly, so precise! Am suspecting that poets such as Marianne Moore and Denise Levertov would heartily approve! (can see kinship with both) ... As a technical matter, it seems fitting that the spondee "creased green" has a line to itself, emphasizing subtly the vowel-sound common to both words.

    And i love "the soprano static of your humanity"! -- and the distinction between silence and "the space that silence makes."

    And of course, the heart that "blinks under the gaze of heaven."

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  2. Wow, thanks, Thomas! Levertov is one of my favorites.

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  3. I can't comment on the poetry as Thomas can, but I know it is good. My credentials are that I am holding a letter Denise Levertov wrote me when she was working on the text for our oratorio - El Salvador: Requiem and Invocation. http://www.estheremery.com/?s=El+Salvador

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    1. Oh, newell, the link was fascinating! Thank you for sharing it. Am I understanding correctly that you composed the music for the oratorio and she composed the text?

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    2. Yes. It was written in 1983. A good friend of mine was working for her as her secretary and introduced us. It was performed in May of 1993.

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    3. What a wonderful experience that must have been. Is there a recording of the oratorio somewhere?

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