Friday, July 26, 2013

Dry Times



Sometimes
the word stream sinks
to a trickle over tan stones,
leaving an emptiness,
high as a man's shoulder,
where water once cut a path,
rinsed soil from tree roots
as meticulously as any
archeologist's brush.
The roots elbow
from the brown bank
into the emptiness--
silent, living sculptures woven
from years and shade
to uphold the emerald
skin of the world
and to guard the chasm's
white lightening wink
where sunshine still finds
the water.

4 comments:

  1. What lovely imagery, Elena. I especially like the description of the roots as "silent, living sculptors woven / from years and shade" and the "emerald skin of the world" -- wonderful!

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  2. What Dr Impson said! I meant to praise this poem as soon as it was posted, but couldn't find the right words. It is strong, it is secure, it is clear, and it is beautiful. I picture the "trickle over tan stones" and I see small, shallow, rocky rivers like the Gale in northern New Hampshire. And the simile involving the archeologist's brush is masterful. Thank you for adding to the supply of the world's beauty with this excellent poem!

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  3. Thank you for visiting and leaving such kind words here, Thomas!

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