Robins warble, whistle up and down
the thinnest light, flick sedate riffs
of second soprano lines, harmonize
the scattering of night and the silhouette
of day gathered to pounce.
the thinnest light, flick sedate riffs
of second soprano lines, harmonize
the scattering of night and the silhouette
of day gathered to pounce.
Vivid, precise, and beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThank you! I liked the vowel sounds in this one--they were the best way I could think of to try to catch a bit of the robin's song.
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